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Goodbye goodbye
Hello Hello
simply words until
connected to you
temporary goodbye
goodbye forever
good bye
bad bye
goodbye
can be a
mystery
or
welcome
relief
or
death by
words
no one
does not
know
goodbye
“i wrote this, and it was fun.”
sandra m. hagan (c) january 19, 2012
7 comments:
This was beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.
Mary
Oh Sandi, sweet poetess, your words are touchung me more than i can say, x
Deceptively simple and very clever. :)
Great example of the ambiguous word goodbye presented beautifully!
Good for you! Glad it was fun--that's the best kind of writing!
Your commitment to poetry reminds me that I have to get going in that department again. Loved your verse!
Clever, I loved bad bye ;D
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