Thursday, February 16, 2012

hOW CupID shOT mE! - Blog Hop


i was
tall and tan
golden hair
the girl from
venice
riding in a
chartreuse
VW van
through the window
what did i spy
in englewoods
lemon bay
salty green waves
and
bridge construction
played the hand
of fate
a young handsome
no shirt and tan
stop sign in hand
came over
stuck his head
in my window
“where have you
been all my life?”
i said “in Venice.”
kewpie doll harbinger
my friend jenny
saw the look
on my face
“you been struck
by lightning girl”
so we made
a date
the paradise lounge
in port charlotte
there was
dancing
laughter and love
“young love,
first love,
filled with true
devotion...”
i was sixteen
he was
twenty-one




“i wrote this bitter sweet memory..”
“he remained my best friend until April 27, 2011, the day of his death.”
Song:  Young Love
written by: Ric Cartey & Carole Joyner
performed by:  Sonny James

3 comments:

Diane said...

Thanks for sharing your bitter-sweet story. Hugs friend.

booguloo said...

Sorry for your loss. Happy you have some time for remembering better times.

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

What a well written, poignant poem. Thanks for sharing!

Madeleine Begun Kane