“I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.”
Pablo Neruda
❤
can you hear
me where you are?
“the love”
i
wanted
so bad
it hurt
the only
love
i
wanted
and
was
denied
our love
was a
secret
actually
there
was a
shadow
for real
and
we had
a love
between
the shadow
and
the
soul
i’m wondering
can you
think
of
me
now
8 comments:
Sandra,
I love this poem very much. Filled with mystery and powerful feelings.
Eileen
Oh, yes. Beautifully said and I know I wont be the only one who says, oh, yes, that's just how it was.
I am sure the writing was fun. Feels so. I am also sure the loving described was not. Feels so. You did a good job.
Love and roses - what could be more beautiful?
We had a love between the shadow and the soul... I love that.
Wow! I'm glad you wrote this ~ and it was fun! I've also wondered, "can you think of me now".
Lovely!`
The voice is strong and makes the reader listen. Wonderfully done!
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